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So many of them I already lost,
promises of forever.
So many lines were ultimately crossed,
this is where we sever.

Too many times I said goodbye,
eternity rushed by fast.
Again i am watching the sky,
thinking of the past.

The meaning of broken words,
greedily consumed by trust.
Loneliness always hurts,    
when bonds molder into dust.

Part of me knew it all along,
its used to be left behind.
Soon you too will be gone,
while my heart slowly turns blind.

Sometimes you have to go,
to stay here forever.
My place has lost its glow,
now I let the wind guide me like a feather.
This one is actually quiet old (2007), but I recently revised it and today I feel like posting it. To clear the topic a bit, its about friendships.
On my harddrive it was named 'people'. This title merely servered the function of making the topic transparently, but it just sounds so unappealing that I altered it.

However, let me know what you think as per usual comments and feedback are very welcomed =)
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CrimsonSeal Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014   Traditional Artist
I really don't know what to say exactly. You write so beautifully with words that seem to go with along so smoothly.
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ShinaRose7 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, thank you so much for the kind words and the fav :hug:
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akiko-sen Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
its very beautifull and thats why i fave it :)
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ShinaRose7 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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akiko-sen Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
you're welcome ;)
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FlightFan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Gosh... I don't know how to explain the feelings I felt while reading this. Sadness, defeat, disillusion and resignation. It felt like dying a bit. Bah! I probably don't make sense and I suck at trying to guess what people feel. I just know that friendship is like any kind of relationship. You have to work together to make it work and respect your friend's wishes and needs if you want the same. I'll stop before I sound like an idiot. But it's beautiful and I fave it. :)
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ShinaRose7 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha no you did a good job guessing ^^
Yes indeed, all relationships require effort from both parts. Well the poem is older, so its one of the 'I am growing up, learn, get experience and lose my naivity step by step'-poem ;)

Thank you dear, glad you like it =)
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FlightFan Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok. Then I don't suck that much.
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